Micro Fiction from Me

I decided to try a little (pun intended) micro fiction. Hope you enjoy this story with no title.


Susie stepped back to admire her latest painting. The accident had destroyed her right hand and forearm. It took years to recapture her love for art, and more years to train her other hand to stroke the canvas in elegance again.

A few more brushes, and she considered it complete. Her painting depicted Jesus on a white horse. He held the reigns in His left hand.


Have an idea for a title? Drop a comment and I just might go with it!

For Him,

Sarah Elisabeth


Sarah Elisabeth Sawyer is an award-winning inspirational author, speaker and Choctaw storyteller of traditional and fictional tales based on the lives of her people. Get a free e-copy of her first book, "Touch My Tears: Tales from the Trail of Tears": Free e-book

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6 comments on “Micro Fiction from Me
  1. Love the idea (micro) and the ending – ohhh, a title….

    Riding in Victory
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    • Sarah Elisabeth says:

      This is the shortest complete story I’ve written. Funny how it felt like a FaithWriters challenge entry! Like that title idea, Marijo, titles aren’t my strongest point lol

  2. Great story line and micro writing. 🙂 …No ideas for a title. 🙁

    • Sarah Elisabeth says:

      Thanks, it was fun! Required more editing than I thought, you should have seen the first draft 😉

  3. Cindy says:

    Faithful and True (i only thought of that because in Revelation, that’s what it says on the horse He’s riding)
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    • Sarah Elisabeth says:

      Really like that title idea, Cindy, and the thought behind it!

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